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threadbare

threadbare linens
enfolded you;

only
they
kept death
from entering.

Author notes

held by a string.
or by linens.

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  • DarkLotus4Life.
    February 3, 2008
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    great write

  • Improv Machinery
    January 25, 2008
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    hmmmmmmm. i cant quite put my finger on why i like this piece so much. i dont know if its because you leave so much room for interperetation, or if its because of the hanging by a thread metaphor. you have a lot of talent. i will definitely be reading more of your work when i have the time available to me. never stop writing
    Rob


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 24, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • crimsondew
    January 24, 2008
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    death..wish we could keep it away..
    Good take..
    Thank you for your lovely entry...


  • February Moon gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Beautiful.

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