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Love Serene

Lips can speak words of love
A sigh as you look at clouds above
The lovely rose says it all

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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    January 24, 2008

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    you took on the prompt hon and did danger to the competition i love this very calming selection of words you picked here
    good luck


    • Katie Lazette
      January 24, 2008
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      Thank you Mrs. LadyEnthralling for your wonderful comment on my poem. i am so glad that you enjoyed my poem.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    This is just lovely... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • aeolia
    January 24, 2008
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    I'm not personally a fan of love/above rhyme, but this truly is serene.

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