Absorb my skin
Entangle me in your faint ripped jeans
Our bones entombed
in a lost embrace of starlight dreams
My tattered dress sways under the moonlight
As I wait for you ; dance for you
On lavish ashen soil
Cindered bones of past lovers
Now entwined; inseparable
Amongst the mix of beloved remnants
As we will be forever
Together as we fly secure
‘til dusk…..’til death…..’til dust
A contest entry
- We Did The Perfect Crime.I Stole Your Heart & You Stole Mine by Lady Nightshade.
600 points, ended January 29, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie-10 lines-10 entries-48 hours by Lady Nightshade.
600 points, ended January 29, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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7 of 5 stars!
This was lovely, Ziggy-dONO! =3 "'till dusk...'till death....'till dust" =D
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i couldnt find anything more perfect.the images the beauty the darkness,exactly the kind of darkness i wanted.love.i feel love.
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thanks!Oh,wow,I really did not expect it.I entered the other contest but went to far with 19 lines instead of 10(sorry...) which is why i decided for this contest.I hope your boyfriend is happy and best wishes to you both^___^
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Love the last line.
As always, amazing job. =]
I really like the line "Entangle me in your faint ripped jeans"
It's very unique. Awesome job hun. =] -
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Thanks so much^^
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