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Recognize that at my demise
I stole away your sins
Brewed your elixir for eternal life
and the purity within

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  • ImJay
    January 28, 2008
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    Congrats on the bronze, this was a very good poem, I enjoyed every word! Best wishes! -Jay


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 24, 2008

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    My first thought on a title for this is "Tidewater". It reminds me of the ebb and flow of the tides only with life in mind. Beautifully done piece and congrats on the bronze


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    vividly expressive and grasping... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.