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deathbed abstractions

his face peels
      from memory,

weaving itself into
      time, perhaps a
    heaven,

that awaits you.

Author notes

Eleanor de Montfort's last moments; she died in childbirth in 1282. "He" refers to Llywelyn, her husband.

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  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    January 24

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    this is deeply creative and immensely grasping... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    January 24

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    Interesting ... makes me think

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    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda