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Why Have You Forsaken Me?

Why have you forsaken me?
Why have you forsaken me?
Why have you left me alone here tonight?

Inside this icy room; bloody tears I weep
I cry every night; I feel myself grow thin
To the bone I feel so cold and frozen and know that I will forever be alone in here

Why have you forsaken me?
Forsaken me in here

Now, when I cry my tears of beguiled hate
They are as red as the roses you gave me that night
And the thick, black thorns do come, piercing out of my skin

Why, did I ever try to lock you inside?
I was an imprudent lass to even consider that it would work
And now as the closing stages have appeared
I’ve now seen that you’ve forsaken me forsaken me here tonight

I am numb and I am done with this abhorrent sense of worshiped love
But I can’t seem to move from this place; I cry so hard here tonight

My roots have grown so deep into the course hard ground
And now I find as I grow tall I sing to the world that I am released from you
And I cry from the pores of my tender soft body and scream in agony; oh the pain, how it rips my skin and soul apart; murders me both body and soul

I don’t know why I see the grass so green beneath me
I am gone and I do not even crave to present my heart to another life again
I’m gone.
And you;
You have forsaken me; I climb downward from the branches and I am tranced with your Ice cold eyes that assemble my eyes to bleed black tears of vexation

And your lips
Oh, your tender, silky, succulent lips
They bring me such zeal and confinement forever in my heart
But I can not touch you again because of what you have done
And I am sorry for my stroke of transgression on your beautiful body

Why have you forsaken me?
Forsaken me here tonight?
I am gone and alone
Leave me anon
Leave me anon


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  • sapphireangelwings
    May 7, 2008

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    I couldn't stop reading this as it spoke so deftly of something I am experiencing. You have penned this so well. In an odd way it helps to know I am not alone. Kudos to you on this amazing, heart wrenching and piercing piece.


    • Rain-Shot-Rose
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank you for your coment yes, it does feel good to know that you are not alone in matters such as these. Even if you do feel like you are the only one...you aren't. love is so powerful and full of pain and beauty.


  • penman gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great expression and so heart felt. Thank you for sharing.