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lily

withered hands
folded over apron,
unyielding in winter and kitchens.

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Lily was my great-grandmother who died last year at the age of 97. Before she got senile, she loved to bake and always wore this blue dotted apron.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 24, 2008

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    What a beautifully sweet write for Lily

    Congrats on the Gold
    .♥.
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • crimsondew
    January 24, 2008
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    Wonderful essence captured here..Congrats on the gold!


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    This is truly divine, both in simplistic descriptive and imagery... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.