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Lifes Edgewater Lace

Resplendent spiritual epiphany's

transcending
temple sea

 ebb waters
golden filigree.

 

 

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A contest entry

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  • dustookie2
    January 25, 2008

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    You paint well in words like the artist with his brush ...the imagery settles in the still backwaters of my mind...there is a spirituality and calmness from life to spend a moment within this poem...you do the short poetic form so very well. Thank you for a brilliant poem to start the day.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    Such a softness to this piece hun, a gentle profound discovery of faith.... just gorgeous and I do love the title.... goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • stavykm gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Such wonderful imagery in which brings tranquility. Excellent write. I love the title Lifes Edgewaters Lace. The poem as a whole just compliments the title. What a wonderful feeling in which overcame me from just a few brilliant words. Golden winner to me.
    Love
    your lil sis
    Kelle Marie


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 24, 2008

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    Tranquil and intoxicating

    .♥.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    beautifully descriptive and calming... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

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