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Rain

Heaven's droplets

cleanse hearts,

souls touching clouds,

watered

with hope.

A contest entry

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  • daviscth
    January 25, 2008
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    These words hold such imagery for the reader. I'm really happy to see that you won a cup with it!!!

  • Flamecaster
    January 24, 2008
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    OMG...this is a great poem...hope you win and good luck!


  • going nowhere
    January 24, 2008

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    i'm with poet2angels.... i knew this was a winner. of course i can see the trophy there , but even if it wasn't judged yet... i would know.


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    I knew this was a winner..Congrats on your silver...

    Lynda


  • crimsondew
    January 24, 2008
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    beautiful..I love rain....wonderful imagery..I had written a poem on this theme...


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 24, 2008

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    Beautifully expressed

    .♥.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    Beautiful...
    I love rain, and I love your poem. So much said in so few lines. That is such an admirable trait in poetry!

    Lynda


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008
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    How beautiful!.. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

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