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Nature Of Love

Like the dew
Adorning the blades of grass
Our love is delicate

Like the buds
Of flowers
Our love flourishes

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    vividly descriptive... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • aeolia
    January 24, 2008

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    "Are love is delicate" -- I think you mean "our."

    Other than that, really sweet, and ten Internet cookies for using "adorning," which is seriously an awesome word!

    hiraeth.


  • Candy6
    January 24, 2008
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    I love nature

    Beautiful written poem.