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Tarnished Heart

You tarnished my heart of gold
with your deceit and cruelty,
didn't you love me?

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  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    I think we have all been tarnished. I don't think I have any gold left in my heart. It is hard to tell.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 24, 2008
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    Proufoundly sad

    .♥.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    this is a sad but beautifully expressed piece which contains alot within your words. best of luck always


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    sadly expressive and deep... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.