I lay here staring at the ceiling,
trying so hard to fall asleep,
but all I can think about is you.
Are you really in bed sick?
Or are you talking to someone else?
I trust and love you with all my heart,
but I can't help thinking there is someone else.
Maybe there isn't anyone else,
but I'd just like to know.
Is she prettier or slimmer?
Is she smarter or less whiney?
Does she have straight blonde hair,
with piercing blue eyes?
What does she have that I don't?
Does she even exsist,
is she even real?
Maybe she's just a figment of my imagination,
something I just created.
I wish I knew the truth for sure.
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I can surely relate to this. I think a lot of people can...both sexes at that. Very well written. Good work.
Kelli
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your words are so strong my dear
i loved this poem yet another amazing write!
it seems many others will be able to see where
you are comeing from it this one.
for the "what is it she had i dont type thing"
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You have captured an emotion that I think we have all had at one time or another. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Well I definately think that every girl out there can relate to this!! I really enjoyed this one and it spoke quite clearly to the reader. Filled with much emotion and despair... Wonderful job!
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Miss Chrissy, this is a very sad poem. I'm sorry you're having troubles with your guy. I hope you get all the answers you need. Just remember, you are worth more than he'll ever know..whatever the outcome..peace,
jin
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