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evicted

evicted focus
desperately seeks
answers to ponderings
plaguing mystic mind

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    Beautifully thought provoking and moving...wonderful strength in your brevity...you are a wonder with word choice that hits home...
    Great work, dear sir.
    Love


  • Tam
    January 26, 2008

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    oh...

    this leaves me teared up...
    brilliant use of each and every word painting depth beyond my comment...
    your heart and Muse are always a wonderful thing to witness, sir...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    Ten words on any topic is the hardest type of poem to write, I think. This short verse read as a psychic want ad, and I thought it was very effective. Peace, Liz


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 24, 2008

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    Thought-provoking!

    .♥.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    Truly creative and very expressive... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

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