My veins are filled
With battery acid
Suffocate me
Tell
Me
I'm fine
And there's serenity in the knowledge
That maybe you still love me
Maybe not
Definitely...
... not
Must you tear me apart?
World?
Love?
No...
Just a Friend...
This is more than I can handle
I don't want this to be...
THE END!
No, I love you too
much for this razor
A contest entry
- Horror, Dark, and pain filled by Stormy Days.
450 points, ended January 29, 2008, 21 entries
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes by karmacae.
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Hi, I would love to read hat you have put to paper, but I cant see the words, can you fix this please?? Thanks
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I fixed it. :]
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i like the way you formed your poem... its really good and dark thank you for entering
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Dark....
very well done. But, for me this was very hard to read with the font being the way it is.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
this is exactly how i feel right now, yet i can't seem to express the true pain in my writing. my muse has left me and nothing will come out :[
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dark creepy wow
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