Every Ocean Dances In Waves,
Barring The Path Between Me And You.
This Life, This Heart Wont Last Forever
And I Can't Bear The Thought Of Never Knowing You.
Oh But It Could Be So Easy
If Only We'd Allow It.
I Love You And You Say You Love Me
Yet I Can't Reach Out And Hold You,
I Can't Wipe Away Your Tears.
From So Far Out There's Nothing I Can Do.
I Just Want To Be Close To You...
Author notes
Embraceable You (Frank Sinatra)
2. I love all the many charms about you. Above all, I want these arms about you.
I didn't really want to write this, I wanted to choose a more elaborate lyric, but this was the one I felt the most about. I spent hous trying to make stuff up for some of the others, but this one was done in about 30 minutes.
Marzipan
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A contest entry
- Double the Lyrics by Morrigan Trinity.
525 points, ended January 31, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me your honest and CRITICAL opinion.
Comments
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I'm glad you are so dedicated when entering my contests. You do great work. This is an awesome poem. what really struck me was the capitalization; that's such a unique style. You've done a wonderful job with this lyric, which is perfect. I love this song. Old Blue Eyes is my dead honey.
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Nah, I saw someone else capitalise every word in a poem and shamelessly pinched the idea.
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