If you named your tears, would they have my name?
Could it be I that is the source of your pain.
This hurts me so, this breaks my heart.
I pray to Christ,we can have a new start!
So I say right now, I will commit to you!
From now till death, this I will do!
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awwwwww
so sweet and such a devoted promise which will be so many times tempted, but your words speak of truth and from the heart, beautiful to me...
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Mate your wife must love you to write for her like this. Poignant write . Great work.
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You so have the right idea about family love and marriage it appears.. God Bless
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beautiful poem, and very sweetly written. Blessings always! ~ Trisha
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Actually my tears are falling now but they belong to someone else's name.
This is beautifully written, keep up the wonderful work.
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*tears* How you have me laughing one minute and crying the next with your words, I dunno, but keep it up!
, wow this yet another beautiful poem, it's a true reflection of your heart...
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Aww.. another sweet write!! These are so endearing and heartfelt!
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