This new puppy loves to chew,
on the laces of my shoe.
He bites at my nose while in my lap,
or licks my ears or steals my cap.
He growls at my cap fights to take it.
He loves to bark and run and shake it.
So full of fun, he acts so tough,
this bouncy little ball of fluff.
Author notes
"I (Del Gustafson), hereby allow Mackerth to use my poem for the intended purpose".
A contest entry
- Sick Young Boy Needs a Poem! by mackereth.
2500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tripe?
Comments
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GREAT!!!
Love that poem Del! You are either very young, or have a great memory to know what a boy of two would like to hear!
Simply tremendous.
I am thinking of getting a puppy myself in the next couple of months, when my first pension check arrives.
I live alone now, and think it would be good for the two of us!
Best of luck here Del! Though I think you and I know that we've already been paid, huh?
Best Regards,
John-Las Vegas, Nevada
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you are a nice one.. nice poem you can rhyme with grace
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Thanks you again for another great entry. Your ability to make your poems turn into a very vivid picture in my mind is amazing. i really enjoyed the up-beat mood of this poem, along with the rhyming scheme. Great entry and good luck with this one as well.
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Lovely!
He sounds like hard work...wish i had his energy lol.
This flows very well and is very cute.
Good luck in the contest.
Dolores x
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