He left her here
to die
Her ghost
still resides
Author notes
10 words, picture C, her dress was shear, you could see through, ghostly
A contest entry
- PIF once more by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice one but why do us men always get the blame?
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Your right, her lover/killer could have been female. lol
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Nice....you don't know the power of the Dark Side!
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beautifully written with death.i thought it looked ghostly aswell. some powerful and emotive words best of luck
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Thank you for your comments, The first picture is what lured me, but no words came (I would love to know the photograpers name). The other spoke, so i wrote. thanks for the contest. I have yet to write a dark poem, maybe one day.
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