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Fire Starter

Do you feel the
heat of my hands?
Watch as I use
my pyrokenisis.

Burning everything
that gets in my way.
Sit around the camp
fire and watch my flames.

Do you know
what i am?
Do you know
who I am?

Do you know what
I am capable of?
Do you really want
to start with me?

I am the nightmares
in yur dreams.
I am the fire
in the forests.

I AM THE
FIRE STARTER.

Author notes

I remembered my day when i loved to start fires. so burn on fires around the world.

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  • Florida Sunshine
    February 24, 2008
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    Re' Author notes: ~ I'm not sure you realize how much damage and pain a fire can bring ~ the distruction can be devestating ~

    The poem is Very well written regardless how I feel about the subject matter ~ I think you did a terrific job ~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me

    Best of luck to you!


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    January 24, 2008
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    You spelled your wrong, other than that it was very interesting, but sadly i must DQ you.