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Silence

Thoughts racing from one thing to the next
Though no problems are solved because I'm stuck here waiting
Anticipating the next move I'll be making
It's making me crazy

It's too quite
I'm in need of destraction
Some other interaction
To deflect even a fraction of my dissatisfaction with this situation

Have you ever heard silence scream at you
Poke fun and laugh then madly gleam at you
Send you extreme streams of lost hope and battered dreams
While you unsuccessfully try to careen these fiends

It's kinda like a drug
It can be good to you, but an overdose is fatal
Cause it can make your dreams feel like a fable
Like you're unable, to eliminate the complications that seems to be stapled
And nailed down to the depths of you
Suckin all the hope untill there aint nothin left of you

Because silence can drive you insane
And it's hard to maintain, when your only company is
Nothing

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  • SOLS.Moonlight
    January 25, 2008

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    It's been a long time before you've written man. This is very true, silence can sometimes drive a person insane. Great write with a smooth flow.


  • blakdiamone
    January 24, 2008

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    YEA WRITE MORE OFTEN!!!!! But still I called you yesterday dude... you okay??? Obviously not by the looks of this post. But other than that, get at me when you can.... and great write... I expect nothing less from you.


  • Expression
    January 24, 2008

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    umm wow baby this sounds almost depressing...You'll get an answer soon enough...other than that..it flowed perfectly and the rhyme was great
    WRITE MORE OFTEN!!!! LOL
    I LOVE YOU
    ♥kaila♥