Less than speechless;
feeling rather
powerless.
Fluttering thoughts
so suffocating.
Author notes
The first picture.
A contest entry
- PIF once more by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow i lovedyour word use for this it was amazingly penned and really captured the prompt with depth. best of luck


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Thank you very much!
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I really like the words you used. They fit the prompt perfectly, and the whole thing flowed rather nicely. Well done, and good luck!
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Thank you.
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