Sewn shut
lips unable
to cry out
against the abuse
Author notes
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A contest entry
- PIF once more by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be nice!
Comments
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aw auntie hugs
i love you -
this is a wonderful take on the prompt and your 10 words truly capture the pictue. it is true and i was once silenced as you penned this.
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Greeat Poem. Nice and short, 10 worlds like it should be. Good luck
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I like your take on the prompt, and I can see why you used it. Sadly, it's true that victims are often afraid to speak up, believing that they deserve to be abused. All we can do is let them know that we are there for them. Brilliant work, and best of luck in the contest.
Love and light always,
Laura, aka Immortal
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