your lips parted
a sea from which
no memory echoes.
Author notes
10w
A contest entry
- PIF once more by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is just to say
that out all of the quickies that you've recently posted, I like this one the best. Why? Bias and that fact that it could be as simple as an every day memory lapse.
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beautifully written with such power in your words. i loved how you paint imagery with this aswell.;best of luck
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Ooh, this is exquisite! You said so much in so little... Well done, and good luck in the contest!
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