When You Are Low And Down
Starting To Feel The Fire Burn You,
Remember,
Keep The Faith.
Stepping from the darkness
Up towards the light
Quickly Moving away
From my previous plight
Reaching the top of the mountain
The suns rays apon my face
Now at the top of this land form
I never want to leave this place
When I was down and low
Feeling such a disgrace
I remember someone calling down
You've gotta keep the Faith
Never really understood
Up untill this day
Looking back on it now
Laughing at my old dismay
So my friend,
When you are low and down
Starting to feel the fire burn you,
Keep the Faith
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is a wonderful message you put out through the poem. Especially telling the reader of your own story, and then using the advice you received to help another. Inspirational piece. Loved it.
Thanks for sharing & entering my contest A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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really good
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thats really good marc, i completely agree! get out of the dark and into the light (because when its dark i tend to bump into things) lol
well done a good write, welcome back from the darkside =D xxxxcelphiexxxx
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