Deep down inside
I feel the pain
That is coming
The pain that you feel
That has taken over you
Your feelings, your fears
How can we overcome
The sadness inside
The scars from our life
Is there another way
To feel happier
To be a better person
Why can't we see
The good in ourselves
Why can't we remember
The good times that
We shared
I see myself drowning
In this pain
Why can't I just be
Me again
Why must I put myself
Through the torture
Of feeling this sadness
Why can't I bring myself
To be a happier person
Instead of going through
All of my faults
Why must I only see the bad
Things that have happened
In my life
Why can't I always just see
The good that I have done?
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Comments
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great write
amber this really is a great poem and i really like it. keep up the great work and ok idk but you did good lol
~Ash~
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I really liked this poem..so many times i seem to only focous on my faults and weeknesses and fail to see what good i have accomplished. so i can realate to this poem. Very well written.
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