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midst of truth

today was truly different
the suns doesn't glow
i wake up having no love for the world

hearing you voice my heart did ache
screaming with hatred
and why I did not know

hearing my best friend for one last time
then watching him go
welcoming a world so dreary

 

i fell with out knowing

so hard with no stopping

recalling my true love

 

attempting to speak of it

tripping over words

then finally stuttering them out

 

running from my confession 

that you did do

not once did you think what could have been

 

left without a best friend

and empty love

lingering on the kiss we shared

 

my heart relies on you

I'm left walking in this hollow silhouette

tell me I'm still alive

or am i truly dead? 

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    January 28, 2008
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    Wow, sensational-somewhat-thanks for your entry into my contest