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How dare you

How dare you speak for God, you who have hate in your heart!
How dare you decide a truth, you could never comprehend!

Do not blame our creator, for the hate that you spew.
It is your vanity that pushes you onwards, not truth.

“Look at me, the true servant of Christ!”
You make me sick you lousy lice.

Like a parasite you sit in wait, deciding others fate.
Hell or heaven for all awaits, that much is true.

Therefore, I hope your judgment day is not too soon.
For fool! You speak of sin.

Author notes

This is for the idiots picketing Heath Ledgers Memorial Service.

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  • shadowofmyself5
    December 5, 2008

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    Oh my, I can sense the anger in ever word...
    I have felt like this before, but the Lord is the only one that can judge...

  • Little Hala Treeez
    November 22, 2008

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    I'm trying to picture the random furious anger that it took you to write this. But I do understand. lol, we've all been there.

  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    November 22, 2008
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    I really liked this, powerfully meaning too. :] lovely write!


  • smonte19124 gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Good for you tell again for me. I loved every word and it should have been published in the paper. Great Job! God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Balthazar
    November 22, 2008

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    Execellent write

    I think this poem is great. I hope it will give a wake up call to religious fundamentalists. Very great write.


  • Gafa
    November 21, 2008

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    great write!

    loved, " you make me sick you lousy lice" i am struggling with faith these days and this poems epitomizes a lot of my feelings towards "holy-er than thou" types!


  • IamtheDragon
    January 30, 2008

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    Great write

    Yeah people contradicting themselves by believing in something and saying something they think they are alowed to say beacuse of that belief is a major thorn in my side. Strong powerfull words in a powerful write.

  • petepsy
    January 27, 2008
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    So so

    I take it this is about people using the name of God for their own actions. Or believing they commune with some supreme being. What if there is no such being? Whereas the early Greeks and Romans believed there were many Gods. Can anyone be right or wrong?

  • kirbysman Moderators member
    January 25, 2008

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    Don't hold back, Michelle, let it out. Lots of idiots in the world and not limited to any continent nor country. Glad to see you posting and anxious to talk with you again. Well done!

    Paul


  • PainedLoner
    January 24, 2008
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    Great write! Very deep and very well written! No one should ever speak of god in any bad manner. People who speak like that tend to make me mad. Very well written!

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