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Me, Myself and Misery

Everyday I paint my face,
Faking another life with grace.
And when I go into my act,
The seats and aisles are truly packed.

My red, blue and yellow attire,
Completely cover the inside crier.
With practiced skill I fall for thrills,
No one knows I sleep popping pills.

It’s funny when I am insulted on stage,
Even funnier when it happens offstage.
Mirth comes easy while I perform,
But anguish is my real platform.

The children love me, so do the elders.
But only when I am dodging jugglers.
In my own skin, I am invisible to them.
By chance if seen, I am treated like phlegm.

But yet I live on, befriending despair.
No more fight in my bones to spare.
It seems I’ve accepted life’s knockdown
I am, after all, the infamous clown.

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 10, 2008

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    Really good writing here. The flow and imagery are brilliant. I really loved the rhyme too. You are very gifted. Well done indeed.

    All the best
    Wayne Leon


    • bubbasamuel
      March 10, 2008
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      thank you so much leon...ur a major source of encouragement to me


  • LadyLavender gold member
    January 30, 2008

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    Strong write. love the rhyme scheme. Thank you for taking me through this internal journey with your write.

    Good luck and thankyou for entering.


  • Forgot2Breathe
    January 24, 2008

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    Poor clown. But I do love this poem. Its really something I was asking for, because you always think that clowns are happy, but they might not be and all they do is entertain us with funny anticts, we don't care if they're sad, because we're happy.
    I love this.

    Major Huge Kudos!!