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Boobs

Boisterously bouncing
Objects of lust
Obscuring vision
Beloved by men
Sensually seducing

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Written November 14th, 2003

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  • Apz
    April 5, 2005
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    Great acrostic! Man, and you chose an awsome word too. I gotta say, your wording is very descriptive and I only had pleasent thoughts going trough my mind. Keep it up!


  • NoIQ gold member
    February 23, 2005
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    With a title like this, this poem was always going to be in the birthday contest entry I made. Moreover, I was laughing after I read it, so I tried my best to incorporate the "theme", particularly "beloved by men" into the poem in your honor too. Yes, we men can be single-minded in our vision at times. Get used to it. You're still only at the beginning of your time in life of dealing with men's wandering eyes. This was a great, very humorous, and correctly cynical (in parts) acrostic.

  • blink-and-tear
    March 29, 2004
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    hmmmmm, wow........i mean, this is interesting! not quite sure what to say about that one. creative topic. you have some imaginary juices flowing up in that brain of yours for sure! the picture at the top is adorkable lol nice job

    -braeden

  • F Etc
    March 29, 2004
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    pmsl @ obscuring vision....

    blindness by boobs.

    Strange write

    Jadey xXxXx


  • forgottentreasure
    March 29, 2004
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    sounds like boobs to me!!! very cute, great acrostic...we rule the world with our boobs, it is great!

    lovely write way to go!

  • Shannon
    November 28, 2003
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    This is absolutely wonderful and I enjoyed reading this. WOW way to go girl! Boobs are the greatest. We hold alll the power =)

    blueyes


  • Desire gold member
    November 17, 2003
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    Ha Ha

    LOL~I love this...the poem that is ~I love my boobs too~LOL~The background had me rolling~Damn~I am funny when I don't wanna be ~The baby is adorable and at first I thought I was going to see a pair of hooters~LOL~ I was preparing to cover my innocent eyes~Awesome write and the pic with the background serves it beautifully~I am still laughing~Great write~Look forward to more~Big hugs and much love~Desire


  • FlawedDestiny
    November 15, 2003
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    ROFL I loved this~ caused me to smile, and I did need it. I love the picture too. Far too cute! Love it.
    ~*Destiny*~

  • Sideways
    November 15, 2003
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    Lol. Very cute. An extremely unique acrostic. The background is especially fitting too.....
    This poem is also extremely true, and one I think most women would enjoy to read and could relate to.
    (I still don't understand men's obsession with these annoying things. heh)

  • sammipants 08
    November 15, 2003
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    ooooh wow. this was hilarious...i loved the pic. omg, awesome poem. this brightened my day!!! lol, great work.

    Pretty x0x Baby


  • Lo0opy
    November 15, 2003
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    I should say this is dedicated to my roommate...Gretchen...hehe...cuz she has the biggest of them all hahaha

  • Lo0opy
    November 15, 2003
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    well...you get a push-up bra and pretend you do have some...at least that's what I do yay pretend! haha...but then...the guy is like...where'd they go??...after the clasp comes undone...oh well He can pretend too

    ~~T~~


  • BerBer
    November 15, 2003
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    I knew men like boobies but I didn't think they were a big deal. Until a couple years ago I thought they were made for feeding babies. Until I was "shown" what they can do, now I know better Chill. Fun poem, I like it. Amber.

  • Rockgirl10987
    November 15, 2003
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    WOW that was very VERY creative, good job.. honestly... haha

    rocknroll

    Lauren


  • catz Moderators member
    November 15, 2003
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    Lol... such a fun read, LoOopy and so true, too Amusing, isn't it, what a couple of glands can do for (and to) a person. Love this short but cute read.

    Dee


  • fleetingshadows
    November 15, 2003
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    Booby trapped! LOL

    Ah yes, boobs. Such a hassle... did I mention I used to like sleeping on my stomach? It used to be comfortable! *whine* I suppose it's okay though. I've used these things more than once to my advantage. Heh heh... funny what boys will do for a set of mammaries. Boobs! Well said! LOL


  • erin ravenskye
    November 14, 2003
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    Great Lo0opy, what do you do when you don't have any?

    ~ Erin


  • Kalexi
    November 14, 2003
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    Hee hee, that was soooooooooo cute

    Take care,

    Karen

  • Shibbi
    November 14, 2003
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    hehe, nice acrostic piece... (hehe - she said boobs)... lol - just tryin to pretend im young and imature again... not really working. great write, boobs... sez it all

  • Christabell
    November 14, 2003
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    *blinks* well. That was amusing. I just clicked on a random link... and this is what I got to. Fun stuff, eh? But I love it, being a female myself. Very funny write!

    ~Christy


  • November 14, 2003
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    bad

    this was interesting!

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