Ingredients:
1 small child
1 evil monster
1 dark corner
1 whole heart
2 cups darkness
1 lb. touches
1 cup pain
2 lbs. tears
2 tsp. hate
4 tsp. screams
3 tsps. loneliness
dash of frowns
Directions:
Mix together small child
plus evil monster
place in dark corner
beat until stiff
Crack open the heart
remove all hope
separate innocence
throw shell away
Slowly blend in
one cup pain
two cups darkness
two pounds tears
Set this aside
wait for a while
add two teaspoons hate
two teaspoons screams
Mix in touches
add loneliness
sift in frowns
stir until numb
Remove all trust
add remaining screams
Directions correctly followed
you will soon see
Fear was created
this kitchen of nightmares
a tormented child
a soul lost to all
Author notes
Bags of Oranges Don't Leave Bruises
[[NUMBER 8]]
A contest entry
- Anything Dark by satan-.
460 points, ended March 2, 2008, 75 entries
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Honestly what is your opinion?
Comments
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Excellent, It was really original and unique. =] You have an interesting format of writing for this poem and it flowed together quite nicely. Thanks for the entry.
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Thanks!
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wwow,i thought i was gonna hate this but its really goood.really different and unique.i really like this.its so creative.such a sad situation written in such a casual not serious way.i want to say this is so cool but what you wrote about is horrible.its just the way you wrote it thats cool.great idea.
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it was pretty cool
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thanks.;]
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Quite the unique write very interesting and different this recipe far to many people know and use...
Thanks for entering my contest
Much Love, Raneika
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thanks;]
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this is truly amazing
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thanks;]
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Wow
This is a very creative expression of fear. It has a simmering air of tenderness that is even more terrifying than the monstrosity of the situation... I'm sorry if you had to go through this, but I hope that writing has offered you some sort of closure. Very well done... This deserves a hell of a lot more than an HM, if you ask me!
[is being completely honest
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Take care, sweetie
Laura xxx
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thank you!
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this is pure genius
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FINALLY! Something different and creative! lol, I really liked this! Its...just brilliant! I liked the last bit, the whole "created in kitchen of nightmares" bit
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thanks;] I dont know,i guess i take what i go through and put it into poetry.
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