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Away

What is harder than your heart,
frozen in a way untouchable?
You too far away.

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    Middle line disappointed me a little - perhaps wasn't as hard hitting as the rest but extremely lamenting, nicely done.

    Thanks for entering,