You climbed all the way to the top
You made my heart stop
You took a leap
Landed on your feet
Back up top you go
Leaping to and fro
The cat followed you up
You squealed like a duck
Down you came
That wasn't part of the game
Darn that cat
for scaring you like that
Author notes
This is about my One in a half year old. She like to climb the couch and jump down onto the cushions. Scary!! I swear they have no fear.
A contest entry
- some funny childrens poetry by maralisa.
525 points, ended January 28, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BABY ON THE WAY, 660 POINTS by tonyher.
600 points, ended April 5, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I enjoyed your poem very much. My best wishes to your one year old. God bless
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Ha this is funny. i do love cats like sly children themselves. they are very playful and slinky.
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the cat and the baby go back and forth, it is actually the funniest thing you will ever see with an animal child bond. I love it. Thank you so much for your comment
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Aw. This one is very cool, it is definitely childrens poetry in many ways
is so cute
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This is a really cute piece. I think you did well with it and I'm sure the kids will enjoy it. Great one!
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Thank you for the comment. I read it to my youngest with the oldest reading over my shoulder. The oldest thought it was funny. She really did enjoy it. I think my youngest is to young to understand, but hey, she sat still for a minute while I read!!! That is priceless itself!!!
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very funny i love it especaily you squealed like a duck good luck in my contest and thanks for your poem
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I am so glad you liked it. This was fun to write. Remembering it was also the greatest!!! Thank you for commenting.
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