Why do I need
anyone else?
I am yours,
fully yours.
My heart has been
captured
by You.
And yet,
I am glad that
I gave You
my heart.
Because You will never
break it.
Why do I need
a guy for
Valentine's Day
when I have
You, Lord?
I'm falling
deeper and deeper
in love
with You
each day.
Lord, I want
to be wholly
Yours forever.
I want to be
Your girl
Your princess
Your jewel
forever.
I will be
devoted to You
forever, Lord.
You will always
be my Valentine.
God, I know
the girls around me
all have their
boyfriends.
But Lord,
at some point,
their boyfriends will
break their hearts,
betray them,
and leave them empty.
But guess what?
I have You, Jesus.
You're my
Prince Charming
because
You died for me.
My Valentine Card
this year is red.
Do You know why, Lord?
It's red because
Your blood covers it all.
Your blood was
spilled because of
love
for me.
I love You,
Lord,
because You
loved me first.
You're my Valentine, Lord.
Why do I need
guys when I have
the King of Kings?
So thank you,
my Valentine,
for Your love.
But thank you
most of all
for the card
and Your
gift.
A contest entry
- Valentine Poetry... a contest for teens age 13 to 18 by Melodies.
600 points, ended February 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites Galore! Enter NOW!!! by xCandieKissesx.
300 points, ended May 31, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The essence of the Christian life, and so hard to live out when most things in our world trumpet against it. Always keep this vision fresh in your mind!
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i just gotta say wow. ur devotion 2 God is very clear. Its gd to portray god as a guy that will never break ur heart.


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this is a beautiful poem. i like how explain that God is ur valentine, my heart has been broken by guys that just don't care about you, but one guy that i met when i was in need and trouble hasn't ever broke my heart or betryaed me in any way....that special gut was God, and i happy to say that he is all that i will ever need....I love this poem...please keep up the great work...
love becca


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very deeopemotions
I guesss you ae right about this valentine, But dont
keep your eyes closed forever.

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I absolutey LOVE this poem-everything in it is so true.This poem says exactly what I feel. Good job
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Woah :)
What an inspiration you are! not only is it a beautiful poem, it declares the most amazing and unbreakable love possible. Well done, a thousand times over


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This was wonderful and oh so true!!
Who needs a guy.
When we have, Jesus!
Wonderful!!


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Amen, sista! ;-)
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I just had to read this beautiful poem again!! I am bookmarking it to come back to from time to time. Love it!!
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This really good. Although im not a person of god but the flow and imgaery was beautiful.
Great write here lassie

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whoa...give me what you've got.
I want to love God like that - I know what he's done for us but my love for him feels dead. This is so beautiful. Like a drink for the thirsty.

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Wow, thuis is sweet and you are right, he is our ultimate Valentine. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks!
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Quite a long piece. I can relate to these feelings, love is beautiful. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks! I think it's really cool that God gave us a desire to love but He still chose to give us free will. I mean, seriously. The fact that He lets us decide how to live our lives shows ultimate love! I would personally hate being some little robot who was like a wind-up doll or something. Man, our God is pretty awesome. :-)
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Glad you brought your poem here!
A most deeply-felt write that shows truly loving devotion.
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Thank you for your continued encouragement. By the way, I love your smileys! :-)
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great
This is a beautiful poem. It shows you are souly devoted to him. Very touching. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank YOU for sharing! Good to hear from you. Thanks!!!
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I liked this poem a lot but was puzzled by the ending "But thank you most of all for the card and your gift".
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I was talking about God's awesome gift of Jesus. I mean, seriously. MY GOD IS AMAZING!!!! He is so good to me! Yeah, my life isn't perfect, but because He gave His Son to die for this world, I can live in Him! And, honestly, life in Him is the only kind worth living. John 10:10, eh?
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Excelent
This has got to be the sweets poem I have ever read. It just made my heart sing with joy. I thank you so very much for shareing this poem. I do hope that you will be bless and have a great night
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Thanks for encouraging me! I really appreciate it. Have a good day!!!
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Hey,
I have a Valentine poems contest going for teens and it takes prewrites.
How'bout you bring this one? 



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The last line is perfect. God is love, which we have a special season to appreciate in this time of the year between Christmas and Easter. St. Valentine was a Christian martyr, which has been almost completely forgotten in the twenty-first century. Thanks for your eloquent reminder!


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AMEN!
Now, that is what I call a Valentine's Day message. Jesus will always be there for you, whether it's Valentine's Day or every other day. Bottom line: He is there. Superb!

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He's our superhero!!! I think it's so cool how at the same time that I'm writing this, He's protecting you and walking right by your side. You're very right. God is Lord every day of the year, not just Christmas or Easter or Valentine's Day. He reigns every day of the year for all of eternity! And people ask why we serve Him??? HE'S AMAZING!!!!! :-) :-) :-)
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nice work
What a wonderful idea.As we search for Valentine's for our loved ones so many forget He who deserves the greatest honor.Very well done.
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Heavenly
It's something you don't see every day, but it's a great piece.
Well done
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awwww. i really like it.! i'm a christian but i definitely don't act like it. it's reminded me a little bit of my faith. ^_
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There is no better Valentine then the Lord,
a wonderful poem,
Thanks for sharing,
Love and Light
Frozentearz -
amazing
really beautiful espiecially for the valentines it's really superb.
so in the mist of love this poem is fantastic and keep up the hard work because you had the ability to write more!!!
your words and the way you used them were also very good .
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Stunningly beautiful!!!
oh my gosh!! did you know you have wriiten a MASTERPIECE? This is the most beautiful Valentines' card I have EVER read!!! absolutley stunning job!!!
SilverButterFly
(Mary)


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