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Payback

The vessel from which I gave love is dry.
Hatred, now in abundance have I.

A contest entry

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    Nicely worded, the imagery is simple but stunning. The chosen words work extremely well.

    Thanks for entering,


  • daviscth silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    These few words sure have a powerful affect. I think you did a great job with this contest entry!!!
    Cathy