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Kitchen's Temptations

Aroma's
           spilling
                   over

bowls of cookie dough

Laced with crystal sugar
dancing on my tongue

Drizzled
          like a
                raindrop

chocolate mixes in

Pecans diced so fine
this cookie is a sin

Battling temptation
water forms at mouth

Eyes becoming BIG now
Senses are alarmed

Opening
          Insert me
                    I'm giving you


delight.

Author notes

i wrote this while my mom made a fantastic cookie, trust me my tummy does agree. yummy =)

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  • katie-jo
    March 14, 2008

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    I love to bake, and this definitely captured the essence of baking something amazingly delicious.
    Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.


  • SpiceRack
    March 3, 2008
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    Good luck in the contest!
    :]


  • One Angry Monkey
    February 27, 2008

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    Now here's someone that really loves a cookie, perhaps a little moer than is healthy. Thanks for the entry, i particularly liked the lines, "drizled like a raindrop" as though the words themselvs are dropping.


  • swanridur
    February 17, 2008

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    Delicious! It does have a quite erotic feel to it but I guess that's chocolate eahh!!


  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    Yuuuuum.
    And I asked my best friend today if she wanted to bake sugar cookies with me tomorrow. D: And you know what she said?
    NO! But she said it with this cute smile, so she might have been joking.. I hope so, 'cause now I am hungry for some cookies!
    This write is delicious. If I could eat it up, I would.
    Bookmarking.

    M a r l u x i a


  • secberm
    February 13, 2008

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    I felt this way about my mom's pinapple turnovers. She could only make them while I was away. Far, far, away. LOL Well done, sis. Write on!

    Dez


  • poppa
    February 11, 2008

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    This is a great write S... I can smell and taste that cookie, I want one .... love the rhyme you have in this and it flows effortlessly.....bravo


  • J McSANE
    January 24, 2008
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    this is great it made me happy.


  • lost-in-darkness12
    January 24, 2008
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    Haha, this is funny, you must really love cookies. ^_^

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