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Milky Way on Words

Cold and iced, her frosted lips
break out the pen and paper
Her thorough words and mishaps
Life has taken her away
Far off into a world that
her mind has made just for her

She sits on milky-white stars
that blaze with ever essence
Like the sky, she blankets us
Sweet and salty, her coating disperses
Glowing with innocent perfection
She shows me where words matter

and traps me in between the lines.

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    January 31, 2008
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    nicely penned

    I am sure she will enjoy the read. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    I love this poem
    your words flow
    with a rhythem of their own.

    I am honored that you have
    penned them for me to read.

    Thank you.

    Riftkin


  • sunflowers21573
    January 24, 2008

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    great

    I love the lines "She sits on milky-white stars that blaze with ever essence" You penned a nice one here. Good luck in the contest