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Wishing So Hard It Hurts

They say that when you cast a wish,
Upon the brightest shiny star,
That all will be well and perfect,
But when I make a wish nothing's right.

I'm doused in feelings which I hate having,
These emotions I can't cope having anymore,

The pain, the suffering, the sadness,

I can't live like this anymore.

 

If I could wish for anything in the world,

I'd wish these thoughts away,

And cast these feelings out of head,

Curse the day I laid eyes of him.

 

That one special guy in my life,

The guy who I cannot get enough of,

This amazing person who's lightened my days,

And made it all worth living for.

 

A man who I could never have to myself,

This wasted love and life that I have,

This passion that roars like a wild fire,

That rages out of control when we're together.

 

You'll never really feel this anguish,

Knowing you'd already given your vows,

Unfaithful were you to her but also to me,

Now everything I feel means nothing... 

 

I can't live with these hopes anymore,

Because wishing isn't working,

There's no hope that he'll ever be mine,

I'm wishing so hard it hurts...

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  • AraLupus
    March 25

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    Thanks for the entry. You could really feel the pain of this unrequainted love, the kind that you want to through awya but no matter how hard you try, you never can.

    Again, thanks! Well done and good luck in the comp


  • BleedingBlackTears
    November 25, 2008
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    hurt it does.well done


  • Falcon Child
    January 29, 2008
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    This is awesome! I wish i had some guy i could feel that way for


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    damn!

    You are turning into one powerhouse of a writer! I know these feelings all too well. I had many times felt like this in my youth, keep your head up, you get through!


    • Passionate Phoenix
      January 24, 2008
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      thanks Rich, my head is a whirlwind of emtionals right now, and if I could dispose of them like a bag of rubbish then I would. thanks again. xx


      p.s a powerhouse? where did that one come from????!!!

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