My heart's on fire, burning, burning
reaching out, searching for you
it blazes for you across horizon's
with hunger that craves deep within.
You're the only one who'll tame my passion
a sea of flames I can't deny
I need you now, my quest won't end
until our two heartbeats resonate.
But know I'm frantic, I beg you wait
You're within my reach, I just can't touch
the fire threatens to consume me whole
this love so strong, this is my quest.
You must feel this yearning soul
"there is love burning to find you;
will you wait for me?" my love
wait for me, please wait for me?
My heart's on fire, burning, burning
reaching out, searching for you
the stars become the eyes that scour,
my universe 'till I find you.
Author notes
Option 1
How does this certain part of a song inspire you?
"There is love burning to find you;; will you wait for me?"
Write a poem//lyrics//whatever with this line somewhere in your poem, or somewhere in your authors note, but SOMEHOW that line has to relate to what you're writing =]
A contest entry
- Tryyy and fit a square into a circle :] *OPTIONS* by innocence jaded.xx.
525 points, ended May 2, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Clearly written with presicion, to pass on the thoughts behind the write. To share in the emotion of a love so desired, and to include the prompt line so aptly too.
The mark of an author who thinks well and writes well.
Thank you for sharing your skill and talent.
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you are a poet on fire, great xx
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oh gran thius is such a beautiful piece which holds so much in so few words.. i love this well done and best of luck always
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Oh this is beautiful hun, you do these love pieces so beautifully.. make me a gushy...
goodluck in the contest
Karen
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