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(Contest) Vindictive Visions

Vindictive visions haunt my mind
Beyond all space, beyond all time.
Hiding truest throughout lies

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    Loved the first phrase [not sure about title matching] but it sticks and the alliteration is beautiful. The flow is intriguing and poem words well.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Dorie
    January 24, 2008
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    Excellent

    Beyond all space, beyond all time. This is just the place for haunting visions and thoughts