I like to watch the sun afloat like morning’s first balloon
arising slowly past the edge of sky’s bespeckled line
just following the soft, peach cloud disguised as crawling dune
until a glow invades the night with alabaster shine
and I will have my private talk with silent, candid moon.
I like to breathe and to inhale the sharp, refreshing air,
the tickling touch of shivers cold along my naked skin,
to sit and dream and slowly sway upon my rocking chair
seduced by gentle sounds of flute, guitar and violin,
while fingers whisper words of love inside my flailing hair.
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A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 10 The Grand FINALE 5000+ Points! by cricketjeff.
5000 points, ended February 12, 2008, 46 entries
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1300 points, ended July 27, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
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This is so beautiful, I don't even have the heart to remove it. SO I'll leave it - but if you do amazing flow [like this] in a darker poem ... you'll have a much better chance at winning
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Breathtaking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was beautiful!!!! The words you used painted such a mental picture that took my breath away. The picture was nice but didn't measure up to the beauty in your words!!!I loved the rhyme sceam as well the five ine stanzas great form and structure. Thanks for lighting up my night with your amazing words here!!!~~Toni~~ -
Another wonderfully worded poem from your pen.I love it Good luck in the contest Excellent
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This is so beautifully written. I can visualize this in my mind and it puts me in a relax and so peaceful state of mind. Well written.Tonya L Turner
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SO RELAXING TO READ!!!!
This just relaxes me so much
's I just love to sit and watch nature in all of its glory.
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this is beautiful, both in emotion and rhyme
~ Nicolette
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sighs. gorgeous...
(I think I need to take this lesson!)
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