Heavenly outcasts,
feathered friends embrace.
Angels Love Also.
Author notes
5x5x5....ALA is an acronym for Angels Love Also
The grayish claylike sculptured background created using the border's art...
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A contest entry
- Haikus by MyDecember.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Truly beautiful. I loved it.
Best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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thanks so much for the nice comment on this work,
Evan
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Nice design on the body and the border is beautiful
The poem is short of coarse but full with imagery. Nicely done on both. Thank you for the entry and best wishes in the contest
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Lovely haiku. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for entering my haiku contest.
Heavenly outcasts,
feathered friends embrace.
Angels Love Also.
This is a well written haiku with a rather different theme. Very interesting, but I have already commented on this haiku and is therefor not elligible for this contest. -
Adorable
This was just too sweet and smooth. keep penning -
is there some significance to ALA?
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added such to author's notes
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just an acronym for Angels Love Also.
Evan
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Beautiful haiku my friend. I would suggest though to not capitalize the word also ~shrugs~ I positively love this image, I too wrote a poem a few months back from it I love the background, it's so warm and I love the framing around the image and the words, all wonderful The embossed background is fabulous too, wonderful work as always be well and be blessed
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Thanks once again for the visit and the nice coments on the work, poem and BG. The reason I capped teh a in also is because of teh acronym, ALA, teh title fro Angels Love Also as it is in teh border...just my weird thinking...lol..
Thx again,
Evan
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Wow. That's pretty great. Angels do indeed love also..Heavenly outcasts.. That's just a wonderful tidbit of information. I also envy people who can write such great marbles of wisdom in such small words.
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OOOH love the haiku... and the background is very artistic
Very talented you be 
Delila
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Thanks so much for the nice comment left with both the Haiku and teh Bg, both are truly appreciated,
Evan
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This poem is absolutely beautiful. I love the haiku and the border images. God bless you Evan in all that you do and write and keep up the wonderful and amazing work my friend.
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Short and beautiful
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Nice background! Wow. I need to learn how to do this emboss thing or whatever it is. That looks awsome. Great haiku also
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thank you for your visit and for the nice comment left with this work,
Evan
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I rarely like Haikus, but this one is very well done. It takes a lot of talent to pull it off and u did it. well versedd.
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Excellently done disciplined poet!
Haiku is so enjoyable to read! It always reminds us
that a word can capture imagery!
I'm very pleased you are with our group writing Haiku,
it is such a well disciplined form of poetry for us
to learn and enjoy!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : )) lovely background imagery too!
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Thank you so mcu for you visit and the wonderful comment you have graced this work with. I do love writing haku as like you it is such an enjoyable form to write as well as read, Thanks again,
Evan
Oh yes..and teh background. Loved how that turned out, that claylike relief texture I made up using the art. Now if I coyld just remember how i did it..thanks again
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Outstanding
This poem portrays so much in such a few lines. The imagery is excellent and I loved the whole concept of angels in love. A pretty haiku which shows a creative and fertile imagination.
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Thanks so much for the visit and for the wonderful omment you have graced this page and work with,
Evan
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beautiful background! i love the colors you have chosen to use! very good indeed!
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Thank you so much for the nice comment on this work,
Evan
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this is a beautiful haiku and i love the way it is penned such a beautifuly written piece of inspiration
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thank you for your visit and for the nice comment left upon this page,
Evan
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It's so short and sweet. I love it. It says so much with very few words. I like how you ended it. "Angels love also." That was just really special. Great work. ^.^
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thank you so much for the visit and for the lovely comment left with this work,
Evan
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awe
beautiful background with words so short & sweet...another good one...it's so short but it's so wonderful and it's making me hunger for a longer poem here...lol...wonderful work,my friend!
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Thank you for your visit and for such a nice comment you have graced this work with,
Evan
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This is cool. I like how you do the relief texture of the photo in the background. So when are you going to write your tutorial? "Backgrounds For Dummies" could be a big hit!
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Lol...thanks so much again and the wonderful comments on this work. And the movie I though of also when compiling this poem and naclground. Now...about teh backgrpund for dummies....ithink you should write one on how to write such flowery and beautiful poems such s that one I mentioned that I will get back to here now. Such beautiful wordage and imagery in that!,
Thx again,
Evan
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Heavenly outcasts,
feathered friends embrace.
Angels Love Also.
Thank you for entering our haiku workshop. During these workshops, we like to comment on the merits of the haiku itself. For that reason we request that you use no graphics. Thank you for your consideration in this. -
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My apologies, as zi did not see anything about that in the rules. Does that go for teh gray background also?
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Rules:
Haiku are written in 17 syllables or less.
Write a haiku. (no haiku chains please)
You may have up to 3 entries.
No adult content, StIcKy CaPs or graphics.
Have fun!
Background is okay, but no additional graphics
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wow i realyy love this one the best the boarder
its beautiful
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Hey there..thanks again for the visit and comment left here on this work..appreciated as always,
Evan
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cool... love the poem and the background!
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thanks again for the visit and nice comment left on this BG and poem,
Gramps
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This is lovely, I enjoy all forms of art and this my poet struck my attention. Great job.
ephiphany♥
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Thanks so much for the wonderful comment left with this work. Truly appreciated,
Evan
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