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Poets Are Damaged Goods

We are trapped in beauty,
keeping in custody every tear dripped upon the pages
of every broken heartbeat.
It is ours, sacred like a Holy Bible.
Where love is, broken or not, God is always there.
We poets might be no more than damaged goods, ya know,
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Hopefully, someone likes Garage Sailing (yes, it's spelled right).

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  • Pisces Pieces
    February 19, 2008
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    I can, naturally, relate.

    I most enjoy the first three lines, I think they are beautiful and accurate. I also love how you wrap up, it's matter-of-fact, and makes me smile

    (I came across your contest and decided to check you out. I'm from Minnesota too )


    Michele


  • creationsfromheart
    January 24, 2008

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    LOL this is too much, you are amazing and wrote this so quickly! I should sleep well with the laghter in my head, thank you for the laughter