finally my life is coming back togeather
ever since i met you i have changed
no more deppression envelopes me
i am a happy person
no more cutting across my skin
just laughing and watching you smile at me
no more letting anyone tell me what to do
i am in control of my life now and it feels good
you have helped me bring my life back togeather
you made me see there is something out there to live for
someone who will love you and care for you
theres no reason not to smile anymore
so thank you for helping me bring my life back togeather
you've helped me alot and i love you for it
i am so happy with you
so thank you my dear husband
A contest entry
- A Fun Valentine by im only half empty.
700 points, ended January 30, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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Okay, first, who are you? You didn't tell me...
I like how it flows together. Great job...
There a few grammar errors, but I'ma nazi about that stuff. -
Very sweet! He's a lucky man
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