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City of life

Far beyond the water
Into the city of life
Destinies journey begins
Waves of emotion
Crash into the foundation
Of all that lights
Up our very essence
Slowly washing over
All that was, and
All that will ever be

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  • penman gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.

  • Aisades
    January 24, 2008

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    Waves

    Waves of emotion. Strong verse there.
    This is very philosophical. I enjoy that about you.