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Cultural Lights


In from the open sea again
Lights full of welcome and glimmer
Seen from afar the life that it leads
Each port a new experience
Around the world a new port each time
The sailors life for me
From spice & satin
To diamonds and night life
The endless cultural debri
This is the places to be



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The ocean's lure!

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  • penman gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • Quiet places
      January 25, 2008
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      Thank you for the compliments my friend!I'm happy you liked my poem! Don


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    This is beautiful hun, the lure of home from the glories of the open sea... goodluck in the contest with this one

    Karen


    • Quiet places
      January 25, 2008
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      Thank you my dear!! Mezmerizing huh! I loved the lights getting clear from afar in the ocean. Don


  • StarEyes
    January 24, 2008

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    My Dearest Brother...

    Oh my what a read!! Sounds to me as if, the ocean can have just as much as a pull to some, as the mountains to others..... Kinda of a much needed place of relaxation.... To be alone with one's thoughts sometimes!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Quiet places
      January 25, 2008
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      Yes my sister, this is an ever moving and changing experience living on the sea. I enjoyed it as I do the mountains. I prefer the mountains over the sea. Thank you for the compliments! Don

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