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Replenished (Etheree)

A
pink glow
in the west
Sun is at rest
Busy day is done
time for nightime fun
We will dine, we will dance
Perhaps enhance our tired romnce
Then back to earth at the dawning
Big bright smile on our face while yawning
This great date, this fine night has made my day.

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  • penman gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • WolfHeart
    January 24, 2008

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    I really like this - etherees work so beautifully. There was a sense of fun and a great glow of imagery. Well-written and intruiguing. Best of luck to you in the contest.

    Wolfie