within these walls
sunshine beams in
bells ring
sigh
relief
Author notes
another day at school
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/10/0 by Lady Australis.
600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow can I relate to this one!! Waiting for the bell....felt like it would take forever. Congrats on the gold and capturing a whole lot in just 10 words.
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wow. this is the one you won gold on huh? great job with that. Somehow you have sun beaming in thru walls eh? sounds like a great inner happiness one can posses.
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You are my sunshine my only sunshine you make me happy when skies are grey....yea it makes me think of that.
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Congrats on gold!
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Wonderful take..
ALl the best!
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oh i like
goodluck -
promt shineshine sighs
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i finished sorry about that
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