you were pale,
a peeled whale bone,
a sighing sun.
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/10/0 by SweetXDestiny.
600 points, ended January 23, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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not bad congrats on your award thanks for sharing regards zaj
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i've read through some of your pieces. i like your shorter writes better. this was absolutely strong. especially in the image the last line gave.
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cute
goodluck -
prompt sunshine sighs
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it's up
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