My dearest friend,
I'm waiting for you
Awaiting your decision
Deep in your heart you know
I never really left you
My heart is always with you
We are forever connected
I can't live like this
My heart breaks everyday
When I can't feel your touch
Come back to me
My arms are open wide
My heart lingers
I'm waiting for you
There's no need to hide
Please don't run away this time
I'm always here for you
No matter what
Let me hold you
I'll keep you safe
Let me save you from her foxy charms
Tender kisses, I'll give your face
As I cradle you in my soft embrace
Holding you close, I'll sing for you
True love's song, only for you
Of love once lost, but was found true
I'll sing for you always, forever my love
I'm waiting for you
To return to true love
Author notes
Dedicated with all the love in my heart. I hope that the person who this poem is for returns home.
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900 points, ended January 18, 2009, 359 entries
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Forever.
that's how it always seems to be. -
wow this is so deep I always love personal writes cause the are way more emotional Great write!
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
And Good Luck!
-♥Amy♥
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Ohhhhhh, the pain, and undying love in this one! I, too am waiting for someone, but I am not lucky enough to get that wish, as he will never return to my arms, except in dreams
You did a great job on this one! I love it. I hope you don't have to wait too long.
Best of luck in this contest!
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Nicely written some hard parts with the flow but mostly the flow is very nice. I love the last lines "I'll sing for you always, forever my love, i'm waiting for you to return to true love" Just wonderfully written.
Overall well done on this poem.
Keep up the great work.
Emma
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always glad to hear from you. i appreciate your comments and hope to hear more from you. glad you like my work. thanks again!
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kinda reminds me of an old quote "i'll wait for you forever, she said endlessly" keep writing
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that's cool that it reminds you of that quote...glad you enjoyed the poem.
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