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Evening Set Sighs

Sunrise smiles
daylight skies

shadow cast dials
into sunset sighs.

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PROMPT: SUNSHINE SIGHS
10 WORDS
10 min

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A contest entry

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    Sunset sighs, these are my favourites, brilliant to see this taking out a well worthy trophy, grand job and congrats hun

    Karen


  • dustookie2
    January 24, 2008

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    Congrats on the bronze .... like the imagery and the flow of this one HH...sunrise to sunset... a good take on the prompt.


  • stompsalot
    January 24, 2008

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    gorgeous write

    beautiful poetry here! congrats on your trophy! i especially like the "shadow cast dials" nice word choice playing on the sundial.
    many blessings and *stomps


  • crimsondew
    January 24, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery..Congrats on bronze!


  • penman gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. congratulations on your bronze.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 23, 2008
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    this is pretty
    goodluck


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 23, 2008
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    i changed it to 10 words
    sorry for the inconvence

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